pvp clip (retail 6.0-6.1) need feedback

[Dc PvP]

Greetings friends!

Need some constructive feedback about this clip: what parts were interesting to warch (if any) and what parts were boring. (input time line if possible).

I didn't like the begining, from 00:01 to 04:00. Can't change it, since i don't have better materials to work with.

Need this information to figure out on what kind of footage (from Nost this time) i should input in my next pvp clip on.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjXM833fG7Y

thanks for you time!

[Dreez]

Unfortunately, this video is not available in your country because it could contain music from UMG, for which we could not agree on conditions of use with GEMA.

the part where I have to use a proxy to watch it
alternatively if the music is going to be copyrighted, upload it on WCM

[Goffz]

clean up your ui