pvp clip (retail 6.0-6.1) need feedback

Greetings friends!
Need some constructive feedback about this clip: what parts were interesting to warch (if any) and what parts were boring. (input time line if possible).
I didn't like the begining, from 00:01 to 04:00. Can't change it, since i don't have better materials to work with.
Need this information to figure out on what kind of footage (from Nost this time) i should input in my next pvp clip on.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjXM833fG7Y
thanks for you time!
Need some constructive feedback about this clip: what parts were interesting to warch (if any) and what parts were boring. (input time line if possible).
I didn't like the begining, from 00:01 to 04:00. Can't change it, since i don't have better materials to work with.
Need this information to figure out on what kind of footage (from Nost this time) i should input in my next pvp clip on.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjXM833fG7Y
thanks for you time!